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David Newgreen ([identity profile] 4thofeleven.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] 4thofeleven 2008-12-01 05:55 am (UTC)

That'd be pretty much how I'd rate it; the story never really seems to get any momentum - I guess part of it is that it's setting up characters and plot points for later in the series, but on the other hand, there's nothing there where I'm thinking "Huh, I wonder what (character)'s deal is; I bet (plot point) will be important later." - it all feels like padding.

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