on 2008-12-01 05:55 am (UTC)
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That'd be pretty much how I'd rate it; the story never really seems to get any momentum - I guess part of it is that it's setting up characters and plot points for later in the series, but on the other hand, there's nothing there where I'm thinking "Huh, I wonder what (character)'s deal is; I bet (plot point) will be important later." - it all feels like padding.
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